Friday, October 11, 2013

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Nowadays our generation is seen as irresponsible, indifferent and lazy. People believe that our generation has no values and rules, that we think only about ourselves and won't help others in need. I object and personally I think that being involved and helping other people in our communities is a beneficial thing to us and to others.


There is a variety of ways that students could be more involved in their communities. Students could raise money for poor families or sick people in the society. They could encourage other people in their society to join them to clean their city or make it safer. Students could volunteer in youth movements and organize activities with the community, like happenings or events in the city, involving the communities.


All the events and the happenings I talked about won't happen if the schools in our communities and the students communities don't raise the awareness and emphasize the importance of being involved in the community.Schools need to have lessons about community service, teach values and help the students to choose their own path to be more involved in their communities.


To conclude, I think our generation can be helpful, we can make a difference in our communities.
We can change our and others' lives  for the better.
We just need help and the right push to do it. We can be helpful but we just need to be motivated.   

Much better. Very good work!
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Daphna

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