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  78 Homa And Migdal st.

                                                             Holon
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November 2, 2013

 Mr. Michael Nike 
 manager 
"Cley Zemmer" store.
106 Chamber Road
Los Angeles, California
96184

Dear  Mr. Nike,

I write this letter to complain about the latest raise of the prices of the music instruments and the music CD's in your store. All the prices were suddenly raised by more than 30 % presents, I think that the prices are too high. I am a regular costumer, I love to buy CD's  in your store and I bought my first musical instrument in your store.

I hope it is a mistake and that the prices will be as the way they were before. I bought some CD's of my favorite band and then I realized that it cost me twice than the usual price. I really love your store, it has a big variety of music and a big variety of musical instruments. 

I always love to come to your store and to try the musical instruments and listen to music so I can decide what to buy, but because of the raise of the prices I need to find another store for music. I really don’t want to look for another store, so I am writing this letter to suggest you lower the prices by 15 % from the current price.

If however you don’t want to lower the prices, at least offer some deals.
You could sell two items in a higher price, you could sell musical instruments with music sheets with the 30% higher price. You could sell music albums at a higher price but give the second album for free.

I don't want a refund but I hope you'll take my letter seriously and that you'll make me want to continue buying in your store.

Yours truly,

Tom Potter Jones.


Much better. Well done!
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Daphna

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