Two disruption = expel(ww.) 

25 Eilat street

Holon

96185

March 14, 2014

 Mr. Adar Arad
(The Principal)
Kugel HIgh School

Pob 14457

Holon

Dear (Mr.) Arad,

I have noticed that recently you have decided on a new rule that says(ww.) that each student that will disrupt the lesson should be automatically expelled from school after the second warning. I think the rule is right and fair.

The rule will give a chance to students to correct their behavior, a chance not to be expelled from school after one mistake they make in class. The rule will make students think twice about their actions, it will make them more concentrate(gr.) in class and will make them want to control their desires and their actions. It will also give more power to the teachers in class. They could maintain a good lesson by expelling the students who disrupt. It will make the students respect their teachers.

Moreover, the new rule will create a nice and relax(gr.) environment for the students who want to study and can't study because of the students who disrupt the class. I (a word is missing here) you should think to an assignment to that rule(phr.- not clear). I think that each student that disrupt(gr.) the class should be expelled and also do an assignment over the material he lost in the class because of his behavior.

To sum up, I think that you are doing a good job for creating(gr.+ww.) a nice environment for the students in class. You are doing a god job with teaching and correcting wrong behavior and to bequeath(ww.) rules and boundaries at(ww.) bad students.

Sincerely yours,

Tom Poter Jones.     
Nice, but needs work.
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Daphna 

   

Talent or Hard Work?

Talent Or Hard Work ?

Recently I was asked  "what does success in life depend on more – talent or hard work?". It's hard for me to say what has more impact on life but I think the key to success in life is a combination between talent and hard work. 

I think talent is rear, talent is like a gift that people get when they are born. Talent is very important in life but talent will be used when a person finds his domain. Each person uses his talent when he finds the right job or the right domain he likes(phr.). Finding the right job for the person's individual talent could make his life easier and (more) successful. The combination of specific talent and the right job can make life successful.

On the other hand, I think talent isn’t the only factor for achieving a successful life. I think hard work and determination are very important for achieving a successful life. A person who has the will and the motivation to work hard will achieve success. There are times when hard work doesn’t bring the results we want because we don’t have the right talent or the specific ability to achieve the goal we want to achieve. For example, I think that in sports like basketball, a person might need talent to achieve success. Hard work isn't enough, a person need to born(gr.- needs to be born) with talent for basketball, this domian is very hard and it has alot of limits that hard work can't pass through.(phr.) - not a very good example for your point here, since basketball also requires a lot of practice and hard work. 

To sum up neither talent nor hard work is(gr.-are) enough to achieve a successful life.
A successful life depends on the combination of the two. Talent will help us find our way but hard work could make it easier and (us) successful.  

You were supposed to choose a side in this issue, and you haven't.
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Daphna       

Reflection – All My Sons – Page 118

Reflection – All My Sons – Page 118 

1. I enjoyed reading the play, it was very special.It is the first time I read a play and I loved it.It was very interesting to see how a play is made, the dialogue was very nice, for the entire play I read the dialogue and I imagined the voices of the characters so it was very nice to read the play. 

2. I didn’t find a specific character that interested me the most, I loved all the characters they all made the play perfect, each character contribute to the play.The most interesting thing I found in the play is the road each character did, their change in the mood, their discovering and their behavior oppose to the events in the play.

3. The thinking skill of comparing and contrasting helped me to understand the change of Keller attitude towards Larry, towards his own crime and his attitude for the family loyalty. Inferring helped me understand the truth about Joe, it helped me understand that he made a crime and that he is guilty.For example inferring helped me understand what Kate said by mistake, the moment when she raveled the lie of Joe to George.  Uncovering motives helped me to understand each character action.For example the actions Kate did and the things she said so Ann will leave their family.She packed her stuff and said to her that she needs to leave their family.Each thinking skill helped me to understand better the story, to understand better the characters and their actions. 

Post reading – All My Sons – Page 116, Ex. 1

Dear dairy,

Today we are going to my dad's funeral. I still can't believe he killed himself, I didn't foresee it.
my soul is broken, it is all mixed  up, all the emotions. Anger, sadness, guilt, shame, relief, a feeling of justice that is done, a closure. I'm confused and afraid of what will come next, I don’t know how to continue my life. I loved him but he disappointed me, I feel no hate for him, he will always be my father, I'll remember what he did but I will not forgive him.

My mother told me that I must forget and that I must continue with my life. She's not better than him, she knew about the crime my father committed but she decided to keep it a secret. As I'm mad at my father I'm also mad at my mother. They thought they were protecting me from the truth, (but) they hurt me, my heart is broken, and all I knew was a lie. I discovered that my brother killed himself because of our father's crime. I loved my brother, I miss him very much.

After the funeral today I'm going away, I'm leaving the house, my neighbors, this neighborhood and my love, Ann. Ann has no place with me, she needs to forget me. I can't live with her, I won't bare to look at her eyes after what we (had) discovered. I'm going far away so I can start a new life. I'm not looking back, I want a new start.

For all the people I'm leaving behind, I hope they will be able to continue with their lives, I hope they will find happiness, I hope they won't forget and that they will learn the lesson and make their lives much better. I hope that each one of them will find his way back to his normal life, I want them to remember and to continue their lives. I would like each and every one of them to be a better person, then I'll  know they learned their lesson.

Excellent!
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Daphna