My Diary
Dear diary,
I want to tell you about two days of my week,one of them was very good,I did something for a good friend that needed my help.
On the second day I did something I believe is selfish and bad,and it turnd my day in to a bad day.
1/10/12
I want to tell you about two days of my week,one of them was very good,I did something for a good friend that needed my help.
On the second day I did something I believe is selfish and bad,and it turnd my day in to a bad day.
1/10/12
Dear diary,
Today was a good day. I remembered that my friend needed my help with his big science project,(Start a new sentence) he and I worked on the project for many hours, we searched for information for his project,we bought materials and we finished it,(New sentence)afterwards I heard that he got an A on his project and it made
me happy.
Today was a good day. I remembered that my friend needed my help with his big science project,(Start a new sentence) he and I worked on the project for many hours, we searched for information for his project,we bought materials and we finished it,(New sentence)afterwards I heard that he got an A on his project and it made
me happy.
2/10/12
Dear diary,
Today my day went bad,I didn't meant(gr.) to be so selfish.
I woke up and I remembered that my father asked for my help for the entire day and I said I would help him.Instead, I forgot about it and I went with my firends(sp.) to the beach.
When I came home my father was very angry at me and I felt very bad.
This day was definitely a bad day for me.
In conclusion I think I need to be more organized with my
prioritiesToday my day went bad,I didn't meant(gr.) to be so selfish.
I woke up and I remembered that my father asked for my help for the entire day and I said I would help him.Instead, I forgot about it and I went with my firends(sp.) to the beach.
When I came home my father was very angry at me and I felt very bad.
This day was definitely a bad day for me.
In conclusion I think I need to be more organized with my
so I could make a change,and become a
thoughtful and better person.
This is much better.
(78)
Daphna
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